Teaser Tuesday

TwO dAyS uNtIl ChRiStMaS bReAk! Zero finals down, three to go…

Search the tags for links to previous Thrill Seekers chapters. In this chapter, (called “Consensus: Forking the Lawn is Lame”) Patricia goes back to explain a couple things. Ready, go.

[Teaser snipped; thanks for the comments!]

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  1. I absolutely LOVE your dialogue. It kind of reminds me of John Green’s style, or Cassandra Clare’s. Hysterical and awesome but also realistic. πŸ˜€

    • writerkirsty

      thanks πŸ™‚ I’ve enjoyed reading through this again because my style/voice has changed so much recently, and Patricia’s voice cracks me up now. But I do like my dialogue… and I think the same tone hangs around in The Inbetween.

  2. Ditto on the dialogue! I love how fast it all goes. “I want a Ph.D, not life in prison” – Silly Ben, you are undermining the fantasticness of this story (;

  3. This was so snappy! I completely forgot I wasn’t reading an actual novel someone had published. This is a really, really good scene. πŸ™‚

    -Mandy

  4. writerkirsty

    aww, you guys are making me blush. and I am falling in love with TS again after a looong time of forgetting about it!

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